Friday, 9 August 2019

My narrative


two weeks ago we finished our narratives were we got to choose a picture and make a story about the picture and in the story we could put in what ever we want but we had to follow a certain layout anyway hope you enjoy my narrative.

Life of a Giant


“Hi i’m Tommy and this is my story, well I guess you wanna start reading so let’s get into the story. Once upon a time... wait no we can do much better wait I know... In a land far far away. No no this is terrible you know what let’s just start all ready.”


Another exciting day like any other day dark and stuck in a cave just how I like it. see us giant’s live in caves and caverns and “yep” we live underground. We never wanted to live underground but we do. Nobody knows why we do even I don't know we just do “and you would think it would be pretty boring right”? Well you’re wrong it’s great we have an arcade soda machines and all that other fun stuff.


One day I wake up and for once there's nothing to do my only job down here is to dig and make the cave bigger and there's one thing I’ve always wondered why can’t I dig up actually you know what I will. Then I get to work and it's Much harder digging up But I'm doing it and then when I'm almost there and there's a tiny gap. Tons of light beams into my eyes and I fall all the way back down the hole. Then I have to climb all the way back up and then I get there and it's super bright. I stand up and the first thing I see is a tiny screaming thing and then I see some tiny toy cars and then more of those tiny things come.


One started shooting me with tiny sharp bullets and then there were tons of toy helicopters and then some small tanks and their where lots of mini figures everywhere but they were all shooting me. Just as I think it couldn’t worse a missile comes down out of nowhere and hits me right in the arm. And then I fall straight to the ground and I get caught in a giant net. Just as I think i’m about to die one of those tiny things says he’s going to save me he said they were called Humans. The tiny army takes me to a lab and the don’t let me go. I’m just surprised they had a lab this big considering everything else is tiny and just as I look behind me I see the creature that said he was going to save me. He jumped down to the control room and opened my cage I ran out and picked him up and we ran and ran until we were so far we couldn't see them and then we decided to rest and we've been running and hiding ever since and that's just how we like it.

THE END


1 comment:

  1. Hi Aidan, I like how you started with the name of the character in your narrative, it was interesting. Next time can you make the writing a little bit bigger so it is easier to see.

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