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My Amazing Narrative

for writing we had to write a story about our holiday but we had to change it up a bit we had to turn it into a narrative we had to write our holiday as a fairy tale. and my story is bit over extradited but that's what I think is good about it. In my story its about me going ice skating in Antarctica but in real life I just went ice skating hope you like my story Bye.

Ice skating 

“Aidan! WAKE UP you’re gonna be late for holiday program” said mum. “Ok mum where am I going today,” said Aidan. “oh ice skating” said mum. “oh come on!” said Aidan.

Today I have to go to holiday program but I don't know why I can’t just go to one of my friends' houses. hopefully I'll at least have some fun at ice skating I’m not sure which ice skating rink we're all going to but I no it's gonna be cold now that I'm at holiday program I get on the van and go to the ice skating rink. where finally here but we aren't in an ice skating rink where in Antarctica and the only reason I know that is because I brought my phone with me just encase I got bored so I checked where we were on google maps. we get out of the van find somewhere to sit and then we check our shoe size and put on some ice skating shoes. I started skating i’m not very good but i tried and failed I had to hold onto the side of the mountain but I kept on falling onto the ice.

After a while I gave up then I went to explore instead of playing on my phone  because I was getting bored watching everyone but then I found a penguin so he kept me company. We played and had fun but then the holiday program people could see me with the penguin and told me to put him back where I found him. So then I had to sit down and watch I got really bored but then…

A GIANT polar bear came running over the mountain tops and crashed into the ice. The ice started to crack and everyone fell into the water under the ice, they all had to swim onto the rocky edge of the mountain then run into the van we almost got out of the polar bears reach then it ripped open the back of the van. We slipped down a hill of snow and got out of his reach then we were all celebrating in the small remains of the van. So then we had to get a tow truck and the guy in the tow truck asked what happened so we told him we were attacked by a polar bear but he didn’t believe us. 

But anyway, after that I got back home and snuck my penguin back with me. I did have a feeling it was my fault the polar bear attacked because I took the penguin but I don't think the penguin liked him anyway. When I told my mum what happened she didn’t believe me either she thought the penguin was a stuffed toy. I got pretty bored but then last time a got bored I was almost killed by a polar bear anyway I just jumped up onto the couch and started to play some games on the ps4. And my penguin bites my hand and waddles away with the controller just when I think I can finally relax so then I have to go chase a penguin around the house then he runs into the lounge hops onto the couch and starts playing my games and somehow he won. 

And so the moral of the story is don't steal and never let a penguin on your PlayStation it may be good he gets the world record on all of your games. But then you will have absolutely nothing to play because he’s beaten the hole game. Then after all of that I obviously never wanted to go back to holiday program ever again so my mum finally let me go to my friends house instead and show of all of my wins that my penguin actually got so i'm just happy penguins don't speak English because if they did he would give away that he got all of those wins. Well at least I don’t have to go to holiday program anymore and now I can beat all my friends on my PlayStation now. Anyway, after I go to my friends house I go home and get back on the PS4 and play with my friend Atreyu and then as soon as I join him I suddenly teleport into a game and the game said to me you are in the game phoenix mountain you will be joining Atreyu very soon…

“Oh come on not again I thought the adventure was over,” said Aidan

“Hi Aidan” said Atreyu. “5 4 3 2 1” said the game “Aaaaaaa! Oww I hit my head” said Aidan "Atreyu help me there's a dragon" said Aidan "um I think I was Just eaten HELP!"

THE END

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